So here's a song I wrote a while back on the piano. I just came back from a friend's playing it and was thinking about it, so I thought I'd share it. Let me know what you think the song is about. Also, any ideas for a title would be helpful as well.
Look at this heart. Say what you see.Just as a side-note, the last stanza comes from 2 Nephi 4:30,35.
Say how you feel. Tell it to me. Tell it to me.
Say what you see,
And take me as I am
Through the clouds and above the sun
Take me home. Take me home.
Memories flash in and out of my mind,
Of faults long lost in the passage of time.
Revitalize me with the breath of release
And take away these wounds and set me at ease.
Oh Lord please help me.
I've got to be free;
And I know it will take time
But I've gotta get home.
I gotta get home.
How long will it take for you to save me?
How long will it take for me to fly into the sky?
Come lift me up and let me see your point of view.
Come take me home with you.
White as snow. You will let me know
Crystal clear, where to go from here.
Winter's gone and spring has just begun,
Yeah, bringing light to take away the night.
Lord, I will praise thee forever.
My soul shall rejoice in thee.
My voice shall ascend forever to thee!
1 comment:
I think the song is about striving to be better, and asking the Lord to help you where you feel you fall short, and looking forward to the day when you'll be forever with the Lord. As for a title idea, I'll offer "Take me Home," since you reference it a few times. :) Love you!
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